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雅思作文修改一例:现代技术对人的影响

来源:3G雅思论坛 | 2006-7-18 12:35:49

Modern technology has had a great influence on people’s entertainment choices, making them less creative. Co you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Modern technology has had a great influence on people’s entertainment choices, making them less creative. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Bearing in mind the likely effects of the modern technology on entertainments on today’s users are important, because it is an issue that is discussed daily nowadays by people in both the private and public sectors. However, does the modern technology benefits all aspects of human society? Some people may answer to the contrary. As far as I can see, current technology is undermining modern people’s creative ability by providing individuals sorted ways of relaxation.

The likely effects of modern technology on entertainment for people today are important, because it is an issue that is discussed daily in both the private and public sectors.  However, does modern technology benefit all aspects of human society? Some people may answer in the negative.  As far as I can see, modern technology undermines people’s creative ability by providing individuals pre-digested forms of relaxation.


To begin with , it has been known from the latest resources that modern people prefer to enjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people from all works feel so pressuarable that they turn to modern technology which is supposed to be there providing convenient, time-saving and fresh entertainment while fewer and fewer individuals choose to play jigsaws or make some exquisite handicrafts which is the very things expand their imaginary world and make them more creative in their spare time.

To begin with , it has been known from recent sources that modern people enjoy high-tech ways of recreation. More and more people from all walks of life feel so pressured that they turn to modern technology to provide convenient, time-saving and fresh entertainment; while fewer and fewer individuals choose to play jigsaws or make some exquisite handicrafts,  the kinds of things that expand their imaginations and make them more creative in their spare time.

Furthermore, modern people are more likely to count on current technology whether in physiological or psychological. What is meant by this is that plenty of people fully enjoy the entertaining products such as, TV, MP3 or internet games high-tech brings to them that they spend lots of time on them without doing anything else. Couch-potato syndrome is one such example. The more people rely on those modern entertaining items, the more possible that people form a negative habitual opinion that these high-tech can do everything for them, and the less likely people will be initiative and creative in their life.

Furthermore, modern people are more likely to rely on modern technology whether for physiological or psychological reasons.  What is meant by this is that many people fully enjoy the entertainment devices, such as TV, MP3 or internet games, that high technology brings to them, so that they spend lots of time on them to the detriment of everything else.  The couch-potato syndrome is a result.  The more that people rely on those modern entertainment devices, the more they form a negative habits, relying on all that these high-tech devices can do thing for them, and the less likely like they are to show initiative and be creative in their lives.

It goes without saying that modern technology do bring us low-cost, efficient entertaining products, and these may initiate some individuals’ inspiration occasionally. But that’s very limited compared to the side effects they give rise to.

It goes without saying that modern technology does indeed bring us low-cost, efficient entertainment, and this may on occasion initiate some person's inspiration. But that is very limited compared to the side effects they give rise to.

In conclusion, it is very important to know that it’s the creative ability that make our human society prosperous and flourish. Modern technology is just a powerful tool in the charge of human to benefit our conduction.

In conclusion, it is very important to know that it is our creative ability that makes our human society prosperous and flourishing.  Modern technology is just a powerful tool at the disposal of human beings to benefit the conduct of our lives.

 
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